[Map] Severomorsk (4km) [WIP]

SashaSK8 · 2009-10-10, 15:50

Size: 4 km
Factions: Russia vs. USMC/USA

assets like kashan

Minimap:

Screenshots:

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Mj Pain · 2009-10-10, 15:56

Wow!
Map looks great, will download and check it out..

Oh and welcome to the forums

Tartantyco · 2009-10-10, 15:56

-That looks really good. Downloading now.

EDIT: If Megaupload would stop idling...

EDEDIT: Ok, I went through the map quickly here, it looks awesome, the only thing I'd like to see is more dense forests so they're more useful for cover(Currently PR maps are more like "Evenly spread trees" and "Trees everywhere!"). The large open areas are just a breath of fresh air and I'm sure will make engagements occur at longer ranges and make the terrain determine where and how to advance, as well as making emplacements and vehicles powerful.

arjan · 2009-10-10, 17:30

Welcome to the forums, and great 1st post.
Agree with tartanyco, could use more denser areas.

Also you say ''asset list same as kashan''
Does that mean you have an F16 and A10 on the carrier?
Or do you got Helicopters?

Becouse you know F16's and A10's cant take off or land on carriers.

SashaSK8 · 2009-10-10, 18:07

on this map are no planes, Russia has 2 Mi-28, USMC - 2 Cobras and 1 attack huey

EDIT: I did an open fields for the tank battles, like arma 2

marcoelnk · 2009-10-10, 18:25

Very good start, keep going

Adriaan · 2009-10-10, 19:08

Cool map! Our school has an exchange project with students from a gymnasium in Severomorsk, i haven't seen many pictures though nor have i been there myself so i wouldn't really know how it looks.

I could ask around if anyone has pics

Jonny · 2009-10-10, 19:12

Start posting a LOAD of reference photos, please. I can see many things here that can be improved, and basing improvements on references is a LOT more effective than guessing. You get it right 1st or 2nd time, rather than 5th, if you use reference photos properly.

A quick list, which I'll explain later:
I dont like your industrial area.
The open country lacks development but still shows significant signs of it.
Your housing 'areas' look horribly planned.
Bad use of undergrowth.
Little attention to the forests.
Innapropriate use of statics.
Lack of detail.

But its still a pretty good start though, I have seen far worse. If you had done this a few years ago it would have been put into PR quite quickly.
Well done.

SashaSK8 · 2009-10-10, 19:37

this place near Severomorsk, I have not found photos, only google earh

Amok@ndy · 2009-10-10, 19:46

great map well done

2009-10-10, 15:50	#1
SashaSK8 Retired PR Developer Join Date: Nov 2008 Posts: 213 Russian Federation	[Map] Severomorsk (4km) [WIP] Size: 4 km Factions: Russia vs. USMC/USA assets like kashan Minimap: Screenshots: Download map - MEGAUPLOAD - The leading online storage and file delivery service

2009-10-10, 15:56	#2
Mj Pain Join Date: May 2008 Posts: 1,022 Sweden Location: Strongside	Re: [Map] Severomorsk (4km) Wow! Map looks great, will download and check it out.. Oh and welcome to the forums

2009-10-10, 15:56	#3
Tartantyco Join Date: Oct 2006 Posts: 2,791 Norway Location: Trondheim, Norway	Re: [Map] Severomorsk (4km) -That looks really good. Downloading now. EDIT: If Megaupload would stop idling... EDEDIT: Ok, I went through the map quickly here, it looks awesome, the only thing I'd like to see is more dense forests so they're more useful for cover(Currently PR maps are more like "Evenly spread trees" and "Trees everywhere!"). The large open areas are just a breath of fresh air and I'm sure will make engagements occur at longer ranges and make the terrain determine where and how to advance, as well as making emplacements and vehicles powerful.

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2009-10-10, 17:30	#4
arjan Join Date: Apr 2007 Posts: 1,854 Netherlands	Re: [Map] Severomorsk (4km) [WIP] Welcome to the forums, and great 1st post. Agree with tartanyco, could use more denser areas. Also you say ''asset list same as kashan'' Does that mean you have an F16 and A10 on the carrier? Or do you got Helicopters? Becouse you know F16's and A10's cant take off or land on carriers.
arjan Join Date: Apr 2007 Posts: 1,854 Netherlands

2009-10-10, 18:07	#5
SashaSK8 Retired PR Developer Join Date: Nov 2008 Posts: 213 Russian Federation	Re: [Map] Severomorsk (4km) [WIP] on this map are no planes, Russia has 2 Mi-28, USMC - 2 Cobras and 1 attack huey EDIT: I did an open fields for the tank battles, like arma 2

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2009-10-10, 18:25	#6
marcoelnk Retired PR Developer Join Date: Mar 2007 Posts: 1,579 Germany Location: Munich,Bavaria	Re: [Map] Severomorsk (4km) [WIP] Very good start, keep going

2009-10-10, 19:08	#7
Adriaan Retired PR Developer Join Date: Oct 2008 Posts: 5,097 Netherlands Blog Entries: 1	Re: [Map] Severomorsk (4km) [WIP] Cool map! Our school has an exchange project with students from a gymnasium in Severomorsk, i haven't seen many pictures though nor have i been there myself so i wouldn't really know how it looks. I could ask around if anyone has pics

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2009-10-10, 19:12	#8
Jonny Join Date: Apr 2007 Posts: 3,420 United Kingdom Location: Cambridge	Re: [Map] Severomorsk (4km) [WIP] Start posting a LOAD of reference photos, please. I can see many things here that can be improved, and basing improvements on references is a LOT more effective than guessing. You get it right 1st or 2nd time, rather than 5th, if you use reference photos properly. A quick list, which I'll explain later: I dont like your industrial area. The open country lacks development but still shows significant signs of it. Your housing 'areas' look horribly planned. Bad use of undergrowth. Little attention to the forests. Innapropriate use of statics. Lack of detail. But its still a pretty good start though, I have seen far worse. If you had done this a few years ago it would have been put into PR quite quickly. Well done.

2009-10-10, 19:37	#9
SashaSK8 Retired PR Developer Join Date: Nov 2008 Posts: 213 Russian Federation	Re: [Map] Severomorsk (4km) [WIP] this place near Severomorsk, I have not found photos, only google earh

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2009-10-10, 19:46	#10
Amok@ndy Retired PR Developer Join Date: Nov 2008 Posts: 5,083 Germany Location: Landshut, Bavaria Blog Entries: 9	Re: [Map] Severomorsk (4km) [WIP] great map well done