[Vehicle] Land Rover Defender [WIP](FDF,GB)

Kovanaama · 2013-09-21, 14:08

Hello! o/

Ive been making this model whole summer and now its time to reveal it to you guys!

The model is now 13 349 tris and it contains 1p and 3p together but its still heavy for a jeep.
Im not pro, hell i dont even consider myself as a beginner so feedback is very welcome.

Pics:

CTRifle · 2013-09-21, 14:26

Pretty cool! But yea looks like theres alot of stuff youll have to change and optimize

Hulabi · 2013-09-21, 16:17

Took some better pictures for feedback:

Antol · 2013-09-21, 16:41

Can you post p3d link or something? And some refs photo?

Hulabi · 2013-09-21, 17:19

Sure, but the model got kinda messed up after exporting from .max to .obj for p3d. For example there are no smoothing groups at all:

p3d.in - Land Rover Defender

Mikemonster · 2013-09-21, 20:48

Not a modder, but would it help to make the wheels slightly thinner perhaps?

lucky.BOY · 2013-09-21, 22:06

Could you upload your refs please?

The tris count should get reasonable once you separate your geom0 (1p) and geom1 (3p) meshes. There are a few things that should be fixed, but Ill go into those next time when I have time. Right now my biggest worry is that the model doesnt have quite the right proportions, jusdging from a quick google for refs..

It does actually look pretty good as far as I can say

Hulabi · 2013-09-21, 22:54

Land Rover refs

andreas07 · 2013-09-22, 09:12

Looks good, but something is catching my eye and I don't know what it is.

strima · 2013-09-22, 09:58

Quote:

Originally Posted by andreas07

Looks good, but something is catching my eye and I don't know what it is.

The front of the vehicle is slightly wrong.

Landrovers have a very short front end around the headlights/front of the wings. The model is too stretched:

As you can see the front around the headlights is more square than has been modelled.

2013-09-21, 14:08	#1
Kovanaama Join Date: Sep 2011 Posts: 241 Finland	[Vehicle] Land Rover Defender [WIP](FDF,GB) Hello! o/ Ive been making this model whole summer and now its time to reveal it to you guys! The model is now 13 349 tris and it contains 1p and 3p together but its still heavy for a jeep. Im not pro, hell i dont even consider myself as a beginner so feedback is very welcome. Pics:
Kovanaama Join Date: Sep 2011 Posts: 241 Finland

2013-09-21, 14:26	#2
CTRifle Retired PR Developer Join Date: Jan 2011 Posts: 1,044 Canada Location: Ontario! Blog Entries: 1	Re: [Vehicle] Land Rover Defender [WIP](FDF) Pretty cool! But yea looks like theres alot of stuff youll have to change and optimize

2013-09-21, 16:17	#3
Hulabi Join Date: Aug 2009 Posts: 2,271 Finland	Re: [Vehicle] Land Rover Defender [WIP](FDF) Took some better pictures for feedback:
Hulabi Join Date: Aug 2009 Posts: 2,271 Finland

2013-09-21, 16:41	#4
Antol Join Date: Oct 2010 Posts: 905 Poland Location: Jordanowo/Zielona Gora	Re: [Vehicle] Land Rover Defender [WIP](FDF) Can you post p3d link or something? And some refs photo?

2013-09-21, 17:19	#5
Hulabi Join Date: Aug 2009 Posts: 2,271 Finland	Re: [Vehicle] Land Rover Defender [WIP](FDF) Sure, but the model got kinda messed up after exporting from .max to .obj for p3d. For example there are no smoothing groups at all: p3d.in - Land Rover Defender
Hulabi Join Date: Aug 2009 Posts: 2,271 Finland

2013-09-21, 20:48	#6
Mikemonster Join Date: Mar 2011 Posts: 1,372 United Kingdom	Re: [Vehicle] Land Rover Defender [WIP](FDF) Not a modder, but would it help to make the wheels slightly thinner perhaps?

2013-09-21, 22:06	#7
lucky.BOY Join Date: Mar 2010 Posts: 1,413 Czech Republic Location: Prague	Re: [Vehicle] Land Rover Defender [WIP](FDF) Could you upload your refs please? The tris count should get reasonable once you separate your geom0 (1p) and geom1 (3p) meshes. There are a few things that should be fixed, but Ill go into those next time when I have time. Right now my biggest worry is that the model doesnt have quite the right proportions, jusdging from a quick google for refs.. It does actually look pretty good as far as I can say

2013-09-21, 22:54	#8
Hulabi Join Date: Aug 2009 Posts: 2,271 Finland	Re: [Vehicle] Land Rover Defender [WIP](FDF) Land Rover refs
Hulabi Join Date: Aug 2009 Posts: 2,271 Finland

2013-09-22, 09:12	#9
andreas07 Join Date: Jan 2012 Posts: 52 Estonia Location: Tartu	Re: [Vehicle] Land Rover Defender [WIP](FDF) Looks good, but something is catching my eye and I don't know what it is.